Two Russian immigrants
who lived in Germany saw that at the nearby building
site
there were a lot of bricks and no watchmen.
They decided to stole bricks
and make a sauna.
At night they took a car, went to the building site and
loaded the car trunk with bricks. Suddendly there came
German policemen and stricty asked the men, what the
hell they were doing there. The Russians said that they
had built a sauna and some bricks remained. It was a
pity to throw it out, and they decided to carry it to
this building site.
The German policemen became very angry. They said it
was unlawful to utilise bricks in such an a way. They
said to the men, to take the bricks back and get lost.
I don't think `anecdote' means what you think it means.
Check "anecdotal evidence" and "historical anecdote".
Two Russian immigrantsemigrants?
who lived in Germany saw that at the nearby building site/a/ nearby buildin site.
there were a lot of bricks and no watchmen.Well-said!
They decided to stole bricksto /steal/
and make a sauna.to build a sauna, perhaps?
When we narrate a story with many events in the past we probably should use the Past Simple. Shouldn't we?At night they took a car, went to the building site and loaded the
car trunk with bricks. Suddenly there came German policemen and
strictly asked the men, what the hell they were doing there. The
Russians said that they had built a sauna and some bricks
remained. It was a pity to throw it out, and they decided to carry
it to this building site.
/had/ decided, I think.
The German policemen became very angry. They said it was unlawful
to utilise bricks in such an a way. They said to the men, to take
the bricks back and get lost.
... told the men to take...
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